高考英语新题型：读后续写、概要写作自2016年首次在浙江英语高考卷中亮相，每年交替考查，已成为浙江卷稳定考查的题型。

续写作文高分策略

避让失分点

1.不符合基本要求：字数不够（少于130词）；续写两段的字数比例失调；关键词没有按照要求标识出来；关键词应用到续写文章中出现拼写错误；随意分段；抄袭原文；时态与原文不一致。

2.内容不合逻辑：缺乏合理想象；续写部分内容与上文不连贯：续写部分与已提供材料之间的逻辑、续写两段内容之间的逻辑、续写部分与与所给开头语之间的逻辑不符。

3.语言不够丰富恰当：所使用语法结构与词汇的丰富性、准确性不够；刻意使用生僻词汇和复杂句式，不考虑与原文语言风格的一致性。

4.脑洞开太大：想象不合理；续写部分立意不高；价值观有争议。

三大技巧，巧夺能力分

（1）立意“高大上”，情节丰富合理，使文章脱颖而出；

（2）升格词汇与句式，增加得分亮点；

（3）书写规范工整，卷面开启“美颜”特效，巧得“印象分”。

五审题目，不失基本分

（1）审要求：读后续写所续写短文的词数应为150词左右；应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；续写完成后，用下划线标出所使用的关键词语。

（2）审体裁：明确前文的体裁，确定续写部分的格式和语言风格。

（3）审时态：确定前文的时态，避免续写内容出现时态错误。

（4）审前文大意和要点：读后续写一般是记叙文，所以应找出前文中的六要素（who, when, where, what, how, why），从而读懂前文，确保续写内容与前文的连贯性。

（6）审续写所给首句：仔细研读续写题目所给出的第一句话，注意续写故事与前文叙述的融合性，以及续写两段内容之间的衔接性。

英语作文读后续写

Help is Always Unselfish A selfish mother donated her ears to her imperfect son without telling him about it. At last, the son got the secret from his father after his mother died. Help is always unselfish. The mother donated her ears to her son, showing her greatest love to her child. From these, we can know how difficult it is for parents to raise their children. In the daily life, we always get kind help from our teachers, classmates and friends. And their kind help is always unselfish. When I was in Senior Middle School, I lived in the school. Every time I was ill, my teachers and classmates gave me kind help, taking good care of me all the time. 

In today’s society, I was affected by some bad things, which made me think that there was no kindness in the world. It was my friends who did everything to help me out. From these experiences, I have realized that helping others is necessary, and true love does exist in our daily life. Since then, I have changed myself a lot, and I also give hands to others when they are in need of help.

试题分析：这是一篇以感人故事形式的作文，注意内容、要求，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，尤其是数字的不同表达法。

点评：一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。